a little wee river flowed
with all its subtlety and mildness
in the path it had carved
the puny little drive
the weak force in its flow
as gentle as its nature was
the stream kept on adding
vital drops of water
and grew into a mighty force
with such stimulus, gathered a brutal force
a momentum, never seen never heard
an aggression, never imagined to exist
thrashed all that withstood
broke the barriers that resisted
carved a new path and flowed
with all the mightiness
that flowed and contained
despite its humble origin, grew.
nicely said,
ReplyDeletecan imagine as well.
This is the skill you have.
Words are nicely Moulded.
ReplyDeleteA thought presented in a creative way.
Keep writing.
liked it!!!
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